Sela Locke

OH and by the way Stela, I don't want to be mean, but umm why CAN'T it be about best friend love?? Because quite frankly not every wants to read ...

I think those others've gotten the nitpicks. I'm here to talk about the chapter itself. It flowed well, mostly, although sometimes you put in words that don't quite fit; I'm ...

I don't like reviewing things that other people already have, but there were a few things I was simply itching to point out. And if you don't like harsh reviews, ...

I guess you could say I like it. I mean, subtracting all comparisons between you and other fourteen-year-olds, it flounders a bit, but the characters, while they could use to ...

I don't believe it. I don't believe it. [long rant full of useless compliments and confusing metaphors] If you chicken out and don't make them fall in love in the ...

Since you're too good of an author to really need any of the advice I usually give, I guess I'll have to humbly point out the nitpicks. Look how fast ...

Do you want us to hate Amanda? Because I do. That is, not the character especially, 'cuz there's not much to that, but the way she whines about David, the ...

I don't do nitpicks, and anyways, Smaur got pretty much all of them. So I'm just going to tell you, straight up, what I thought, and we'll go from there. ...

Man, I've done this a billion times, but here we go again. Sela is moi, and I'm not going to be heaping compliments on your head or apologizing for my ...

I couldn't resist throwing my bit in. I've practically done a study on Twilight . I've been on YWS for over a year, and found oodles of Twifans and anti-Twilighters ...

Sela, at y'service. ; ) I'm not here for nittynitpicks, but more sentence structure and the plot-line overall. I did see some typos and things, but a read-over and some ...

The Wings of Merlin , by T. A. Barron. I don't know what possessed me to read it through, but I did, and when I looked back, I realized how ...

This is going to be short, and straight, if you were wondering. The first sentence, though to some extent cliche, got my attention. I thought, Oh, boy! Finally, a vampire ...

I don't have much to say. But, since I decided I'd post, I might as well say what it is and be done with it. [Warning: I tend to be ...

All those others have gotten the nitpicks, so I'm just here to talk about your maniac. I - love - maniacs. I love making them do ridiculous things, I love ...